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What do you think?
« on: February 01, 2007, 12:10:25 am »
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This is my first non-16x16 custom sprite.  Everything was drawn from scratch.  Tell me what you think about it:

Version 1:


Version 2:


Version 3:


In-game view:
custom game 2.exe - 3.34MB
« Last Edit: February 03, 2007, 03:47:45 am by dlbrooks33 »
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Re: What do you think?
« Reply #1 on: February 01, 2007, 12:12:06 am »
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uh...uh...uh....very....um...basic...Not bad though.Just basic
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Re: What do you think?
« Reply #2 on: February 01, 2007, 12:15:15 am »
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Honestly?  The shape is ugly and dis-proportioned, the shading is pretty bad, there isn't much detail... Overall it's not great.  I don't mean to be cold, but it's really not very good.
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Re: What do you think?
« Reply #3 on: February 01, 2007, 11:34:55 am »
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How about version 2?

Version 2:
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Re: What do you think?
« Reply #4 on: February 01, 2007, 05:38:28 pm »
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Anatomy is wrong.
The hair just stays in mid air
The lines are bad
there is no transsition between parts, it just randomly changes
Shading is fail
no contrast
go read some tutorials

Infinitus Edit: Constructive Criticism != This Post.
« Last Edit: February 01, 2007, 05:41:35 pm by Infinitus »
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so my friend stole a giant bag of ketchup out of the ketchup pumping things and brought it to our table and we took it in the bathroom and i smashed it over the sink and kicked it around the bathroom and smeared it everywhere and we all took turns kicking the ketchup out of it and when we were done it looked like an african village was murdered in the bathroom
XFD.
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Re: What do you think?
« Reply #5 on: February 01, 2007, 10:43:30 pm »
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How was it not constructive?
Because I told him it was bad?
I told him what was wrong, and what to go, go get some tutorials.

*sighs*
*elaborates*

Anatomy is wrong.
Body is mishapen, and the proportions are off.
The hair just stays in mid air
Self Explanatory, hair can't float.
The lines are bad
They're rough, and to abrupt.
there is no transsition between parts, it just randomly changes
Also self explanatory, body parts are square.
Shading is fail
The shading is bad, it doesn't even appear to have shading.
no contrast
Self explanatory.
go read some tutorials
Self explanatory.


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so my friend stole a giant bag of ketchup out of the ketchup pumping things and brought it to our table and we took it in the bathroom and i smashed it over the sink and kicked it around the bathroom and smeared it everywhere and we all took turns kicking the ketchup out of it and when we were done it looked like an african village was murdered in the bathroom
XFD.
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Koh

Re: What do you think?
« Reply #6 on: February 03, 2007, 03:48:26 am »
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well I fixed the hair, and you can see how it would look in a game as well:

Version 3:


In-game view:
custom game 2.exe - 3.34MB
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