How was it not constructive?
Because I told him it was bad?
I told him what was wrong, and what to go, go get some tutorials.
*sighs*
*elaborates*
Anatomy is wrong.
Body is mishapen, and the proportions are off.
The hair just stays in mid air
Self Explanatory, hair can't float.
The lines are bad
They're rough, and to abrupt.
there is no transsition between parts, it just randomly changes
Also self explanatory, body parts are square.
Shading is fail
The shading is bad, it doesn't even appear to have shading.
no contrast
Self explanatory.
go read some tutorials
Self explanatory.
