Seriously, it seems as if you want it for some kind of game. Yet you give nothing about the game. No one is going to make anything for you, unless they are going to participate in your project.
Sorry, I have been on this forums before but I never actualy made an account and talked myself so I am kind of new to this. This is for a game known as Spirit Mythes: The Deku Prophet. I'll make a topic discribing it soon.
What do you want it for. Is the clock for a HUD (then it is just way to busy and distracting) or do you want to put it on a building (then it completely lacks shading)?
I already have a better clock for the actuall building. This is just for the HUD. No, I am going to shrink it later, but I just wanted to see if there is any way I can improve it.
What happend to their right eyes. Are they wearing eye patches. For starters, they lack any kind of shading. Second Zelda is really dull and it hurts my eyes to look at her any longer than I could kill an octorok. To much of the same shade of pink. Basing it on young Zelda of OOT is not a good thing to do. I think you can better stick to MC Zelda or FSA Zelda. Because that one really hurts my eyes.
No, Zelda's right eye is just covered by her hair and Sen's right eye is normal. (Sen just has a black birthmark on his cheek as mentioned above.) ~ Panics and tryes to save the octork but fails. ~ I'll try to better distribute different colors of pink on her then.
To be honest, I never really cared for MC Zelda and FSA zelda is actualy their mother in the past so I am trying to come up with a new zelda for this project. This zelda is based off the MC Zelda but made to look simaler to the OoT Zelda (but with brown hair so it isn't like a identicle copy.) ~ Takes you to the eyedocter to get your eyes fixed then takes you to a psycologist to help you forget the image.
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No fuggin clue. It all depends on the game, that you have shown nothing about. When you want to buy the items in the game, what size of the wallet you can expect at the moment of buying, and how easy it is to get the required amount of ruppees.
Well, I don't really want to spoil what all the items do but I can say that some of the items in their are sidequest related and that there is a secret way of entering the back side of the store to get the masks. You start out with a wallet that holds 300 rupees. (Go figure, they'r royalty.) Most of the things in thee are woth more than 500. The next wallet is 600 max. And the last wallet is capped amount of 999.
Really, what do you want with that guy? Is that some kind of boss in a dungeon and when you have hit him too often, a swarm of cucco's come to utterly kill you. Or is it the toilet guy from MM. It is way to big for a cucco. Not to mention green. To big as a human sized character and to small for a dungeon boss. Shading might be right, except that it has a number of hard edges around the cucco.
Actualy, this one I just up to see what come up. Yes it is the toilet guy from MM and OoA. Yes he is to big for a cucco. If you hit him to often, something weird happens, trust me.
He isn't a dungeon boss, he is an oversized cucco NPC for one of the weirdest sidequests I have ever seen in a Zelda or Zelda fan game. (Except maybe stopping "Them" from MM.) I'll try to better perfect the cucco's shadings I guess.
I think the zelda is good though you could add some light grey to the white areas and the red guy is WWAAAYY to bright
and whats with the shop? The clock shouldn't be a hud cause it takes too much room on the screen but the day notifiers are perfect! BUt the clock you can make a clock tower from MM with.
I'll see what I can do with Zelda and Sen. The shop, if I say anything I'd be spoiling the storyline. The clock is going to be for the HUD, but as I said earlier in this post, it will be smaller. Thank you, I am trying to make notifiers for days 7 - 9 also, but it is hard comming up with something that seems to be identicle to the font they used for it in MM. I already got a better clock to use for the clock tower, however.
Biggest thing is- You can't just expect everyone to know what it is you're doing. You need to specify the context before anyone can be a critic.
As I said earlier in this post, I am working on making a post about it in concepts.