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« Reply #19 on: October 28, 2006, 01:10:27 am »
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Frankly, I agree with all of you. But to be fair, my first game was... well, retarded. Much more retarded than this. But I digress. Alpha365, I am going to offer you a little help and organize/develop your story a little more. This is what you SHOULD have posted: I have an idea for a zelda game, but have not currently started yet. Allow me to explain the story:
(NOT IN CHRONOLOGICAL ORDER)
Just after the events of Majora's Mask, a vengeful wizard froze Link within the confines of a cube of solidified magic. Link was supposed to remain within this block forever. Eons (MORE THAN 100 YEARS) after his freezing, a small gang-torn civilization had blossomed out of a charred wasteland. A city powered by both electricity and magic laid just miles from where Link's invulnerable magic block rested. The City was the product of civilizations realization that unchecked magic would destroy the Earth. This realization occured two hundred years after Majora's Mask, when a dark sorcerer channelled great amounts of solar energy towards the Earth, thereby charring its entire surface. The Earth is still doomed to be destroyed, though, because the city is ruled by a corrupt king, who is also secretly part of an orginization called "The Pheonix Flame" who plan to use the city's massive magic supply to once again attempt to destroy the Earth. The only thing that can stop their plan would be to sabotage their magic-chanelling plants and take the king out of power.
One day, a young gang member is attacked by a rival gang. Forced to flee the city, he takes rest nearby in a cloud of smoke, supposedly left over from "The Great Fire" (When Earth was almost destroyed). Running blindly through the thick smoke, which for some reason does not cause breathing trouble, he comes upon a small area that the smoke seems to be flowing around. Looking at the ground, he notices there is a design of three triangles in a pyramaid formation. HE bends down to examine it more closely, but the ground collapses under him, revealing a small underground tomb. After exploring the tomb for a time, he comes upon a large block of what resembles ice sitting atop a pedestal. Another boy about his age appears to be inside it. The first boy walks closer, placing his hands on the block, to get a good look at the kid inside the "ice".
The ice immediately melts, and the boy inside the ice appears to change form into a fairy, which is revealed to be Link, a hero from ancient myths who stopped "The Great Fire" from destroying all life. Link guides the boy in a quest to stop "The Pheonix Flame" from destroying the planet.
Main Characters:
- Kage - The young gang member who discovers Link's eternal resting place.
- Link - The ancient hero who stopped the fury of "The Great Fire". He is now a fairy.
- King Ganon - The overlord of the city, he is the leader of "The Pheonix Flame". Plans to use the city to destroy the Earth.
- Prince Nolan - The son of King Ganon. He detests his father, and when he gets wind of his plan to destroy the world, he begins to sabotage the magic-chanelling plants himself. (His attempts fail, though)
Disguise System:
In the game, Kage can change his outfit. He can use this to his advantage most of the time, being able to switch weapons and disguise himself as a gaurd. Some disguises:
- Fledgling Hero - Kage's starting Hero outfit. Uses a steel pipe as a weapon.
- Amatuer Hero - Kage's second Hero outfit. Kage has now donned a streamlined version of Link's normal green outfit, except with pants. Has a normal mechanized steel sword.
- Experienced Hero - Kage's third Hero outfit. Kage now is wearing a red version of the Hero outfit. He now uses the mechanized Master Sword.
- The Hero - Kage's fourth Hero outfit. Kage now has a blue version of the Hero outfit, and uses a mechanized Master Sword(With an enchantment from the Great Faeries).
- The Savior - Kage's fifth Hero outfit. Kage has temporarily become one with Link by using the Fusion Medallion. His appearance is is that of Link(blonde hair, green hat) wearing Kage's clothes, with glowing green eyes. He uses two swords, a lengthened enchanted master sword(offhand) and a blade of solidified magic and electricity.
- Phantom - Infiltration outfit. Kage wears a "ninja" costume. Attached Moon Charm makes Kage invisible when not moving. Uses a karate chop as a weapon.
- Sword Master - Kage wears slimmed-down streamlined Samurai armor. Uses a longsword, is a master of swordplay. MUST be used on some enemies/bosses to combat their swordplay.
Battle System:
Enemies are magi-electric hybrid robots. They hold "magi-mechanisms", which are used to power nearly all of your weapons.
Most of your weapons run on "Magi-mechanisms", which are magic-electric batterys that diffuse their power into the next "magi-electric" machine/weapon that touches it, i/e most of your weapons. When your weapons run out of these magi-mechanisms, your weapons only do 1/4 of the damage they normally do.
It is a normal LttP type battle system, except with magi-mechanisms, or "mame"s for short.
The cut scenes shall be in 3D.
Note how I excluded "Spiderman Link", because no mom in their right mind would actually tell you to do that, and it was obviously your idea. No offense. But I have developed the story a little more for you, so much so that you could almost build a game off of my post. So please take my hint and reorganize and develop your story a little more before you actually begin your game. And do not do the corndog thing. Most people will percieve it as completely retarded, and trust me, you do not want these people to think that.
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She'll pull out your feathers for her brand new hat and when she's done that she'll feed you to her cat.
People you love will turn their backs on you. You'll lose your hair, your teeth. Your knife will fall of its sheath, but you still don't like to leave until the end of the movie.
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